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27. How to make a good intervention proposal

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The intervention proposal is a crucial part of writing the National High School Examination (ENEM). It consists of suggesting a solution to the problem presented in the argumentative dissertation. To make a good intervention proposal, it is necessary to follow some steps and understand the structure of this part of the essay. Here are 27 tips to help you create an effective intervention proposal:

  1. Understand the proposal: First of all, it is necessary to understand well the proposed theme and the problem that needs to be solved.
  2. Analyze the problem: Identify the causes and consequences of the problem. This will help find an effective solution.
  3. Study the topic: Research the subject to get a broad view of the problem and find possible solutions.
  4. Be specific: Avoid generic proposals. Be specific about what needs to be done to resolve the issue.
  5. Viable proposal: The proposal needs to be possible to carry out. Avoid utopian or impossible-to-implement solutions.
  6. Relevant proposal: The proposed solution must be relevant to the problem at hand. There is no point in proposing a solution that is unrelated to the problem.
  7. Detailed proposal: Detail your proposal. Explain how it will be implemented, who will be responsible, what resources will be needed, and so on.
  8. Coherent proposal: The proposal must be in line with the arguments presented in the essay.
  9. Use the 5-element model: The intervention proposal should contain five elements: the agent, the action, the means/means, the purpose and the detail.
  10. Agent: Who will perform the action? It can be the government, society, school, among others.
  11. Action: What will be done? It is the solution itself.
  12. Medium/Manner: How will the action be performed? Through laws, campaigns, education programs, etc.
  13. Purpose: What is the purpose of the action? It must be linked to the solution of the problem.
  14. Details: How will the action be implemented in practice? It is the details of the proposal.
  15. Be realistic: The proposal must be feasible and realistic, considering the available resources and the reality of the country.
  16. Avoid clichés: Avoid clichés and generic solutions, such as "population awareness". Try to be more creative and specific.
  17. Proofreading: Proofread the proposal to ensure that it is clear, coherent, and free of grammatical errors.
  18. Practice: Practice writing intervention proposals for different themes. This will help develop this skill.
  19. Read examples: Read examples of good intervention proposals to get inspired and understand how they are structured.
  20. Ask for Feedback: Ask others to read your proposal and provide feedback. This can help identify areas for improvement.
  21. Be objective: Avoid stalling. Get straight to the point and be clear in your proposal.
  22. Use data: Use data and statistics to support your proposal. This will give your solution more credibility.
  23. Be critical: Don't accept the problem as something immutable. Be critical and propose solutions to change the situation.
  24. Use formal language: Avoid slang and informal language. Use appropriate language for an argumentative essay.
  25. Avoid simplistic solutions: The problem presented is usually complex, so avoid simplistic and superficial solutions.
  26. Be original: Try to think of original and creative solutions to the problem.
  27. Conclusion: Finalize the proposal in a clear and objective way, reaffirming the importance of the proposed solution.

Following these tips, you will be able to prepare an effective and well-structured intervention proposal, increasing your chances of getting a good grade in the ENEM essay.

Now answer the exercise about the content:

_Which of the following statements is true about the proposed intervention in the ENEM essay?

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