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Product Page Copywriting for Ecommerce Beginners

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Tailoring Product Page Copywriting for Fashion, Electronics, and Home Goods

Capítulo 9

Estimated reading time: 10 minutes

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Why category tailoring matters

Shoppers don’t evaluate every product the same way. They use category-specific “risk filters” to answer: Will this work for me? Your copy should prioritize the details that reduce the most common uncertainty in that category. When you match the shopper’s priority list, you reduce returns, increase confidence, and make comparisons easier without overwhelming them.

CategoryPrimary shopper risksCopy should emphasize
FashionFit, comfort, color mismatch, care effortSize guidance, fabric/feel, accurate color language, styling, care, inclusivity
ElectronicsCompatibility, complexity, performance uncertainty, supportCompatibility first, specs translated into outcomes, setup steps, warranty/support, fair comparisons
Home goodsWill it fit? Will it last? Will it look right?Dimensions clearly, materials/durability, maintenance, room placement cues, use scenarios

Fashion product pages: what shoppers prioritize (and how to write for it)

1) Fit and clear size guidance (reduce “will it fit?” anxiety)

Fashion returns are often driven by fit confusion. Your job is to make sizing feel predictable.

  • State the fit type: slim, relaxed, oversized, true-to-size, tailored, boxy.
  • Anchor with a model reference: model height + size worn (and optionally bust/waist/hip).
  • Give “if you’re between sizes” guidance: size up/down based on desired fit.
  • Call out stretch and structure: “2% elastane for gentle stretch” vs “non-stretch woven.”
  • Use inclusive fit cues: adjustable straps, elastic waist, extended sizes, petite/tall options, bra-friendly straps, room for hips/shoulders.

Step-by-step sizing block (copy workflow):

  1. Write one sentence: “Fits true to size with a relaxed hip.”
  2. Add model info: “Model is 5'9" wearing size M.”
  3. Add between-sizes rule: “Between sizes? Size down for a closer fit; size up for more room in the bust.”
  4. Add measurement cue: “Inseam: 30" (size M).” (Choose 1–3 key measurements that matter most.)

2) Fabric, feel, and comfort (translate material into sensation)

Don’t just list fabric content—explain what it feels like and how it behaves.

  • Hand-feel words: buttery-soft, crisp, airy, brushed, smooth, textured, weighty, drapey.
  • Behavior words: breathable, wrinkle-prone, holds shape, clingy, structured, fluid.
  • Comfort cues: tagless, lined/unlined, seam placement, stretch recovery.

Example translation: “100% cotton poplin” → “Crisp, breathable cotton with a clean structure that holds its shape.”

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3) Styling guidance (help shoppers imagine outfits)

Fashion shoppers often need a mental picture of how to wear it.

  • Give 2–3 outfit pairings (work, weekend, evening).
  • Include shoe and layer suggestions to set the vibe.
  • Use occasion cues: office, travel, date night, wedding guest, errands.

4) Care instructions (reduce “high maintenance” hesitation)

Care is a hidden deal-breaker. Make it obvious and reassuring.

  • State the easiest safe method: machine wash cold, gentle cycle, hang dry.
  • Call out what to avoid: bleach, high heat, tumble dry.
  • If it wrinkles: suggest steaming or “shake out and hang.”

5) Inclusivity and accessibility cues (make more shoppers feel “this is for me”)

  • Extended size range and how it’s graded (if relevant).
  • Adjustability: drawstrings, elastic, removable pads, adjustable straps.
  • Coverage notes: neckline height, sleeve length, lining/opacity.

6) Describe color accurately (and reduce returns)

Color mismatch is a major return driver. Your copy can’t control screens, but it can set expectations.

  • Name + undertone: “Deep olive with warm, golden undertones.”
  • Lighting behavior: “Reads slightly darker indoors; brighter in daylight.”
  • Comparison anchors: “Closer to forest green than sage.”
  • Opacity notes (for light colors): “Not see-through; fully lined.”

Color description template:

[Color name] with [undertone]. In [lighting], it appears [shift]. Closest to [common reference color], not [commonly confused color].

Fashion template (copy blocks you can reuse)

Fit & Sizing: [true-to-size/relaxed/oversized]. [Model info]. Between sizes? [rule]. Key measurements: [1–3]. Stretch: [none/some/high].  Fabric & Feel: [fabric] with a [hand-feel] finish. [breathability/weight/drape].  Styling: Wear it with [outfit 1] or [outfit 2]. Works for [occasion].  Color: [undertone + lighting behavior + comparison].  Care: [simple care]. Avoid [avoidance].  Inclusivity notes: [adjustability/coverage/extended sizes].

Electronics product pages: what shoppers prioritize (and how to write for it)

1) Compatibility first (prevent “won’t work with my setup” returns)

Electronics shoppers scan for compatibility before they care about features.

  • Device/platform compatibility: iOS/Android/Windows/macOS, console models, router standards.
  • Ports and standards: USB-C vs USB-A, HDMI versions, Bluetooth versions, Wi‑Fi bands.
  • What’s included: cables, adapters, mounts, batteries.
  • What’s required: “Requires a USB-C power adapter (not included).”

Step-by-step compatibility block:

  1. List compatible devices/platforms in plain language.
  2. List required ports/standards.
  3. State what’s included vs needed separately.
  4. Add one “common gotcha” line: “Not compatible with X.” (Only if it’s a frequent issue.)

2) Specs translated into outcomes (what the numbers mean)

Specs matter, but shoppers buy results. Pair each key spec with the real-world benefit.

SpecTranslate into outcome
mAh batteryApprox. charges / hours of use
WattsCharging speed / heat management expectations
Hz (refresh rate)Smoother scrolling/gaming
dBHow quiet it feels in a room
Mbps/GbpsStreaming quality, file transfer time

Outcome sentence pattern:

[Spec] → so you can [real-world result] in [common scenario].

3) Setup and daily use (reduce complexity fear)

  • Provide a 3–5 step setup that sounds doable.
  • Clarify app needs, account requirements, and pairing steps.
  • Include “what you’ll see” cues: indicator lights, prompts, buttons.

4) Support and warranty (risk reversal without hype)

  • State warranty length and what it covers (hardware vs accessories).
  • Explain support channels: chat/email/phone, hours, response time if you can.
  • Include troubleshooting help: quick-start guide, video, knowledge base.

5) Comparisons without bashing competitors (help shoppers choose)

Shoppers compare. You can guide the comparison ethically by focusing on use cases and trade-offs.

  • Use “best for” framing: “Best for travel,” “Best for multi-device desks.”
  • Compare your own models when possible (clear upgrade paths).
  • Avoid insults and vague claims like “better than leading brands.”
  • Be specific: “Adds USB-C PD 65W (vs 30W on Model A).”

Electronics template (copy blocks you can reuse)

Compatibility: Works with [devices/platforms]. Requires [ports/standards]. Not compatible with [common exception].  What’s in the box: [items]. You’ll need: [items not included].  Performance (real-world): [spec] → [outcome]. [spec] → [outcome].  Setup: 1) [step] 2) [step] 3) [step]  Support & Warranty: [warranty]. Support via [channels].  Choose the right option: If you need [use case], pick [this]. If you need [use case], pick [that].

Home goods product pages: what shoppers prioritize (and how to write for it)

1) Dimensions and fit in the space (prevent “too big/too small” surprises)

Home goods shoppers visualize placement. Give dimensions in a way that’s easy to imagine.

  • Always provide W × D × H (and seat height, tabletop thickness, or interior dimensions when relevant).
  • Include clearance needs: door swing, drawer pull-out, cord length, wall spacing.
  • Add scale cues: “Fits under most 30" console tables,” “Sized for standard 20" pillows.”

Step-by-step dimension block:

  1. List W × D × H in inches (and cm if you sell internationally).
  2. Add 1–2 “fit checks”: doorway width, under-shelf clearance, mattress size, etc.
  3. Add a placement cue: “Ideal beside a sofa” or “works in narrow entryways.”

2) Materials, durability, and build (answer “will it last?”)

  • Name materials precisely: solid wood vs engineered wood, stainless steel grade if known, fabric weave type.
  • Explain durability in plain terms: scratch resistance, water resistance, weight capacity.
  • Call out construction: reinforced corners, double stitching, welded frame.

3) Maintenance and longevity (reduce “will this be annoying?”)

  • Cleaning method: wipe with damp cloth, mild soap, avoid abrasives.
  • Stain/heat/moisture notes: coasters recommended, heat-safe up to X if applicable.
  • Replacement parts: covers, filters, bulbs, hardware (if available).

4) How it looks in a room (style + placement cues)

Home goods are judged on aesthetics and harmony with existing decor.

  • Use style descriptors: modern, coastal, farmhouse, mid-century, minimalist.
  • Describe finish and undertone: warm oak, cool gray, matte black, brushed brass.
  • Give pairing suggestions: “Pairs with walnut tones and cream textiles.”

5) Use scenarios (make the product feel inevitable)

  • Morning routine, hosting, kids/pets, small-space living, seasonal use.
  • Room-based cues: entryway drop zone, bedside essentials, dining spill cleanup.

Home goods template (copy blocks you can reuse)

Dimensions & Fit: [W × D × H]. Key clearances: [door/drawer/cord]. Placement: Best in [room/spot].  Materials & Build: Made from [materials]. Built with [construction detail]. Supports up to [weight] (if relevant).  Look & Finish: [finish] with [undertone]. Style: [style words]. Pairs well with [pairings].  Daily Use: Great for [scenario 1], [scenario 2].  Care: [cleaning]. Avoid [avoidance].

Side-by-side examples: optimized copy for one product in each category

Fashion example product: “Ribbed Wrap Midi Dress”

Before (generic)After (optimized for fashion priorities)

Ribbed Wrap Midi Dress

Soft ribbed dress with wrap front. Great for any occasion. Available in multiple colors. Easy to wear and flattering.

Fit & Sizing: True to size with a body-skimming fit through the waist and a comfortable stretch. Model is 5'8" wearing size S. Between sizes? Size up for more room at the bust or if you prefer a less fitted look. Stretch: medium (rib knit).

Fabric & Feel: Ribbed knit with a smooth, soft hand-feel and enough weight to drape without clinging.

Styling: Pair with white sneakers and a denim jacket for daytime, or dress it up with heeled boots and gold jewelry for dinner.

Color note (Midnight Navy): Deep navy with cool undertones. Reads nearly black indoors and clearly navy in daylight—closer to “ink” than royal blue.

Care: Machine wash cold, gentle cycle. Lay flat to dry to help the rib keep its shape.

Electronics example product: “65W USB-C GaN Wall Charger (2-Port)”

Before (spec dump)After (optimized for electronics priorities)

65W GaN Charger

  • 65W output
  • USB-C + USB-A
  • Fast charging
  • Compact design

Perfect for phones, tablets, and laptops.

Compatibility: Charges USB-C laptops, tablets, and phones that support USB-C Power Delivery (PD). USB-A port supports standard USB charging for accessories. Requires a USB-C cable (not included). Not compatible with devices that require proprietary barrel chargers.

Performance (what 65W means): 65W USB-C PD → power a compatible laptop or fast-charge a tablet, so you can work or stream without hunting for a bulky brick. Dual ports → charge two devices from one outlet (power is shared when both ports are used).

Setup: 1) Plug into the wall. 2) Connect your USB-C device with a USB-C cable. 3) For a second device, use the USB-A port. Charging starts automatically—no app required.

Support & Warranty: 24-month warranty for the charger body. Support via email with troubleshooting help for cable/device pairing questions.

Choose the right option: Need to charge a laptop and phone on the go? Pick 65W. Only charging phones and earbuds? A 30W model is usually enough.

Home goods example product: “Round Oak Coffee Table (36-inch)”

Before (vague)After (optimized for home goods priorities)

Round Coffee Table

Beautiful round table for your living room. Durable and stylish. Easy to assemble.

Dimensions & Fit: 36" W × 36" D × 16" H. Round shape makes it easy to walk around—ideal for tighter seating areas or homes with kids/pets. Placement cue: works best centered in front of a standard 72–90" sofa with 14–18" of clearance to the seat edge.

Materials & Build: Oak veneer top with a sealed finish for everyday durability; solid wood legs for stability. Reinforced leg brackets help reduce wobble.

Look & Finish: Warm natural oak with subtle grain variation. The tone leans warm (pairs well with cream textiles, tan leather, and brass accents).

Daily Use scenarios: A comfortable surface for coffee + books, board-game nights, or a tray for remotes and candles. Round edge helps soften the look in boxy rooms.

Care: Wipe with a soft, damp cloth. Use coasters for hot mugs and wipe spills promptly to protect the finish.

Now answer the exercise about the content:

When writing copy for an electronics product page, which approach best reduces the shopper’s primary uncertainty?

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Electronics shoppers typically check compatibility first. Clear device/port requirements and included vs needed items prevent “won’t work” returns, while outcome-based specs and brief setup steps reduce performance and complexity concerns.

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